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Things I Can't Explain

I had forgotten those moments
Where we didn't need to move much
But I knew I could live forever
If her hand would stay exactly where it was

The half caress and half
Careful resting place of her fingers
Brought me to life and lowered me
Into a coffin, to resurrect me again

And with her under my shoulder
Nothing at all held me down- nothing
Until you poked through the doorway
And said nothing at all

Even in response to my mundane chatter
That's supposed to make you smile
And there was a look in your eyes
Of closed discomfort and maybe shame

That popped my bubble.

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  • Elsie
    October 13, 2008

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    Oh I love it! Sometimes the best poetry comes out of such horrible feelings. I felt like i was right there, feeling down with you. Great job.


  • Eyecberg
    August 9, 2008
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    How disapointed yoou must feel because that and saddness are what hits me.

    Best,

    Eyec


  • Mud.Puddle.Eyes
    May 12, 2008
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    D=
    Nuuuu.
    Emily be happy, or talk to Nicole. Can I help out?


    • Gingersoul
      May 18, 2008
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      Thanks for being so sweet and wonderful, Nicole, but it's just stupid stupidness. There's no way to change it, except maybe time.