He is an angel
a beautiful masterpiece
a sculpture made by Michaelangelo
not a flaw to the naked eye
The bluest eyes, like the seas
and the most glistening smile
the whitest teeth you will ever find
and golden hair with a hint of brown
He may not be a buff muscle man
but he is quite athletic
he is swift, like a cheetah
but he rolls in a caravan
His appearance is magnificent
one you may never find
but something more perfect than that,
the incredible intelligence this boy has
He is intelligent, like a dolphin
at times, he can be silly, like a monkey
Very mature for his age
And he isn't afraid to speak his mind
He can care far too much
but he loves with everything he has
he can show emotions to anybody
that proves he is a realy man
He is an angel
a beautiful masterpiece
something you have never seen before
and the sight is quite amazing
Author notes
This is the last option. This is a descriptive poem about the boy i truly care about. :]
A contest entry
- Options!! Give Me Anything!! :] by Technicolor.
425 points, ended June 1, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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Wow.. I really like the description. (I too, like an athletic boy with blue eyes, yay!)
What I don't really like though, is the animal refereces. I can see your idea, but it's just not really, completely there.
Good luck!! -
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Thank you for the comment. Yes, he is quite amazing. Yeah..i guess after reading it through a few times, its kinda, weird..hehe. And i get the point your making. :]
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