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Spring Flight

Metamorphosis for two
I’ll be more me
and you, more you.

Cocoons we will throw off,
on wings we will go off
in colors red, white
and all hues.

We’ll follow the system
created in wisdom,
hypnotic in
flight... and woo.

Author notes

in a light mood

please give advice for improvement

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Comments

  • OurxBeginning
    June 6

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    I agree with your AN. This is a light piece, very.. fluttery, heh. I did like it, short and to the point. Thanks for entering and good luck.

  • Rheea gold member
    May 11
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    i like it