Growing up, the youngest of three.
I learned what needed to be.
An older sis and brother,
I learned like no other.
I learned the lesson of life,
I learned the reason of strife.
I learned music of the heart,
That is there from the start.
So here are words of advice.
No matter what, always be nice.
Open your ears and listen,
Much you wont be missin.
Now always agree with women,
Or you'll never be forgiven.
Respect the old,
Do as told.
And most things will be alright,
When alone in dark of night
Author notes
This is for people that are having a hard time in life. The meaning is basically In the whole scheme of things choas is order.
A contest entry
- Rhyme and Flow part 2 Children's - 50,000 points series by cricketjeff.
4000 points, ended June 3, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Simply wonderful my poetic brother.
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My rule for running my house is organized chaos
I disagree with the last commentor, I thought the flow didn't distract from anything. I loved it!!
Warmest,
Mylee -
Thank you for you entry in our children's contest with this interesting poem, we found your flow to be a little uneven which detracted from the overall effect.
Please join us in our future contests, we would like to read more from you...Sue and Jeff
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