Let my metamorphosis begin
The fusion of two evils
The devils have claim my skin
I feel the anguish and burn
I watch as daylight dies
The hypnotic feeling it creates
Infront of my red stained eyes
Innocence has been washed away
Feeling the violent flames
Burning within my heart
The devil carefully stains
My soul's life force
I See the moon living
Out away from earth
The stars are suriving
My eternity's blazing fires
My lonely silence
It comes with mute screems
Shouting out my innocence
Invading colorful dreams
Sensing my soul crawl out
From this continuous pain
It crawls out and shouts
"Please take me, let it end"
I cry out my hurt
Down on the ground
I float by the plague of dirt
And being infested by evil
I'm starting to be insane
I imagine the pleasure of pain
Letting it crawl up and down
Giving that migraine
My soul marches on till nothing's left
Those legions I will face
Those legions I will embrace
Feeling the burn take me
My system has changed
The stop of my mortal beat
The birth of a devil
Forever burning heat
A contest entry
- Options!! Give Me Anything!! :] by Technicolor.
425 points, ended June 1, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
option 4 and 5 this was hard to create i hope you like it go Gold ^^, hehe
Comments
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is as scorching, and as painful
but this is one helluva poem
you have justified the use of fire as metaphor
and your chose of words are amazing -
I really like this poem. You used 2 options, yay! I can tell this was hard to create, it's so good.
Though, in line 33 I think.. "till nothings left" I'm pretty sure it should be "nothing's left" with an apostrophe. Just a little grammatical thing, no biggie.
Good luck in the contest!
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