it's Monday --
morning, one
of my least
favorite
times
of the
day.
we
half-made
plans
last night,
a movie tonight:
just the two of us.
you feel like you're
being forced
to go.
I
never
even
asked
you
to go
with
me.
I'm
thinking:
"I love you."
and
whether
you
still
love me too...
if ever you loved me.
(day 1 begins.)
Author notes
Monday morning.
Hm, nagemote ba naman? Tsk.
So, this is real. But not real. Meaning some parts are true, and other parts are more or less invented. Well, those are still my thoughts. Hmmm. Haha. Right.
A contest entry
- Drop what your doing and write what you are thinking by HereComesTheSun.
450 points, ended May 25, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite contest by Blue-Rose Beauty.
600 points, ended November 10, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hm.. Interesting.
It started off strong, and I really like the form and the background of this.
True right, and I can feel the emotion.
Thanks for entering
- Blue
beauty
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i really like this poem just really shows how you feel and the confussion relationships bring :/ great job i aboslutly loved it
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