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Sweeter Than A Song

 

This rare gem I have been so blessed to
come to find
This everlasting emotion that
has now defined my life
More sweeter than a song or any words
that I could say
You've made love real to me
in every single way

I've taken this for granted,
but you've loved me anyway
I said things that I didn't mean, and still
you stayed and didn't leave
You believed in me when not even I thought hope
was on my side

What have I done
to draw favor in your eyes?
How am I so special?
That you would pick this guy

I've never seen
an angel fall from the skies
But I do believe I'm looking at one
with my own eyes

 

Author notes

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Prompt: "When I first saw you, I saw love. And the first time you touched me, I felt love. And after all this time, you're still the one I love." - Shania Twain

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  • movedon
    July 26, 2008

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    Congratulations on the silver trophy. I really loved it! The poem I mean Beautiful job on this one my brother.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • Blooming Poet
    May 19, 2008

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    This is a little cliche for my liking. So I give it a 90%. It is still very sweet and sincere though. Thats what counts


  • warrior-eagle
    May 11, 2008
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    Wow.
    This is really sweet.
    I say-- 100%

    ...Simply Me♥

  • Blooming Poet
    May 11, 2008
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    I need your username in AN.
    Prompt:
    "When I first saw you, I saw love. And the first time you touched me, I felt love. And after all this time, you're still the one I love." Shania twain