Cause I am not the one
I don't play no games
Cause that like fire
Blowing up in flames
It's not cool
It's not cute
Watch and step back
Fall back
Play them cards carefully
Just watch yourself
Don't Try me
It's all played out wrong
The lies are old
OH, damn, its coming to a close
Just be careful
Watch your deck before it falls
My cards are stack high
Will never fall
Unless you want them to
I say,Play carefully
Don't make no odd move
Cause I'm not the one
To be Playing With!
Don't Try Me
Author notes
hey I dont know how this sound or what not jus something I am thinkin bout..
A contest entry
- Drop what your doing and write what you are thinking by HereComesTheSun.
450 points, ended May 25, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love love love this!! The card anology, just it all. The way it flows is great, and I love how your voice and personality shine from the words. Good luck!
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hey
Thanks so much for your comment its greatly appreciated glad u enjoyed it.
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It's all played out wrong
The lies are old
OH, damn, its coming to a close
Just be careful
Watch your deck before it falls
LOVE LOVE LOVE that stanza! this is a powerful and awesome write i hope you go well in the contest, you have so much talent and i always love reading your new stuff
hope school is going ok for you!
love ya sis
ebs
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Hey
Sis thanks for ure comment and applauds greatly appreciated. I am doing all gud and wonderful. Skool is finally out for me! I graduate tomrrow! I am so glad. HOw are u doing sis? how things goin? hope all is well. I am goin to go for now. Hugs to ya sis.. thanks again..
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it sounds good. Dont Try You!
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hey
Sis thanks for the applauds and comment.
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wonderful
This was a great and owonderful poem! you did a great job! Its sounds perfect. You can understand and read everything just fine. You put your feeling into this poem again. Keep on writting and take care!
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this is just a good poem in general very easy to read and understand but has tons of symbolizim :] i really like i t
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Hey
Sis, thanks for your comment its greatly appreciated.
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You have a lot on your plate in the matter of thinking. I am glad you are standing up against what this person is trying to do to you and saying no.
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hey
Thanks so much for your comments its greatly apprecaited. Yep I have lot on my mind. I dont care for ppl to be playing with me in the wrong way cause its wrong and I done got fed up with it and I'm not takin no more mess along with it.. so its either the person goin to be up front with me and real with me because Jus too much and I am not lettin this person run over top of me in any form. Yep Yep, I just bein taught in life to stand up for myself in life when ppl do wrong to me.
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