I felt your breath before I woke today
You blew your love so softly in my ear
There were no words but I could clearly hear
The love that shaped the thoughts you would convey
Though you are real, you're also in my dreams
How ever far apart I hold you near
And though our love is not the way it seems
There isn't anything you have to fear
Then I awoke and held you in my arms
You let me know your lust in little screams
And then you raised my passion to extremes
You always knew the way to use your charms
My love you are the angel of my heart
You know that you and I can never part
Please tell me what you think
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This is really good! It's erotic yet penned with class and sensuality.
Love,
Amera♥
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Wonderfully romantic and I like the changing rhyme scheme... it kept me focused on the words instead of the rhythm... Well done...
Ken
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Nicely penned, jeff.
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wonderful poem. as usual a beauty of a piece. Always making women swoon. Simply beautiful Jeff.
Love you
Tory
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Sigh sigh sigh...you are completely and totally romantic,
spinning hearts in circles with this write. Everything you write seems to make my days and nights more magical.
Love, Lane
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