Flames are battling against one another
fighting for a win,
heating up the building
with their inordinate sin.
People are dying off like it's nothing,
collapsing on the side
of dead end streets.
Silently she screams,
to the heavens, to hells
voice crackling
under the pitch of her yells.
What's left to live for,
when anarchy meets democracy
but a bunch of rules without a meaning-
(Oh wait, we already had that)
Author notes
Danneh
Total Chaos
Don't ask why i decided on such a weird rhyme scheme. I just did.
A contest entry
- Next Round by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended May 24, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be harsh, be specific.
Comments
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95%
I really hope you make it to the next round
I like this stuff! -
I have to agree with Poetic Grace. Overall score is 91-95%. (even tho I'm not a judge!) I like how you took the prompt, very creative. Nice to know I have rivals, makes we want to really win! LOL. I wish you luck! *Rose*
~Kystal Angel
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This is good.
My overall score for you is:
91%
Great take on the prompt. -
Nice to see yah. Congrats again on making it past the audition, hhope to see you next round
Prompt:
Total Chaos
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