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Per Chance To Dream

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Have you ever noticed

how time is seemingly

nonexistent in a dream

 

and how it often spans

from a few minutes to

several years with ease

 

with no known laws of

physics to pin us down

in this misty existence?

 

Pleasure and nightmare

in a grandiose concert;

with souls mesmerized.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • mzmikki silver member
    May 15
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    God this is so true... Amazing write Michael!!!


  • michelle-x-christine
    May 14
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    Wow! Very true! Good work!


  • Amera gold member
    May 13

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    Perfect! I agree, dreams are amazing and you were able to put it in print. These triplets are wonderful.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • michichoeret
    May 12
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    excellent

    even grumpy michi can't find anything wrong
    great wording of great imagees


  • fortyninereasons silver member
    May 12

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    There are times when you just don't want to wake up. Once you do, you try and will yourself back to where your dream finished. Very thought provoking write here. Juls


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 12

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    I have wondered that! Tho I don't dream much that I remember these days cause of meds lol

    A great piece of thought!


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    May 12

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    Sometimes it is nice to stay inside the dream that tantalises..so much more rewarding Love, Chez


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    May 11

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    Interesting thoughts dear. Your dreams always seem so real whereas mine, I think, are more lost in fantasy...but still interesting nevertheless.

    Always
    Margaret


  • Dalaney gold member
    May 11

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    Introspective and intelligent write...Your writing is always diverse and interesting, my friend, and this poem is no exception. Hope you had a great weekend, Michael. Love the avatar Lane

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