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The Night Visitor


A whisper awakens me, my eyes open to
see you standing at the foot of my bed
I see your hand grasp the end of my sheet
slowly pulling it, without a word beign said

I can feel my heart pounding, as your eyes
flare with passion at what was concealed
My breath comes faster, the cool linin
sheets caressing my body as its revealed

You come closer reaching out
Your fingers touching my cheek
you sshhhh me, your hand moving
to my lips as i speak

you move your fingers as your lips
come closer to mine
I close my eyes, lips parted
waiting as i feel for our breath to combine

Seconds, Minutes, Lifetimes pass before I
sense the emptyness in my moonlit room
I open my eyes, desolation filling my heart
while a familiar pain and loneliness consume

I turn to face my pillow, my eyes
fill and tears slowly start to fall
I slowly drift back off to sleep, hoping
to once again, hear your call

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  • SPIDERMAN!!!!!!!!


  • BabyGurlz
    May 13

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    AWWWWW!

    Thats sucks (I LOVE UR POEM). See I'm big on poems like this and I have had dreams like this before. Good thing is UR AWESOME!!! LOL

    Love Tabby


  • poetboi
    May 12
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    this is basically about me getting somewhere with a relationship i was in, then all of a sudden she leaves me, and its gone. so like with the poem a start where things are slow but happening, then it starts to get more intense then all of a sudden im lonely and alone
  • omfg that is my fav!!!! I love it! You are really good! So what were you thinking when you wrote this??

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