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Hold My Hand

Hold my hand
And I'll tell you a tale
About a girl
And how she's failed

The first is a boy
That you knew well
But don't turn away
There's more to tell

He kept her heart beating
For a whole two years
He broke her heart
And left her with tears

She tries to be nice
But he's with her friend
It took her a while
Not to pretend

The first never happened
But this one did
It ended quickly
His reasons were hid

High School came around
And he caught her eye
It was an Indie love
She never got to try

The next is a story
That's a hard one to tell
It's a dark cave
Where she dare not dwell

He was the new kid
And he took her heart
When it couldn't be better
He tore it apart

Again, she tried
But it was a mistake
This was a love
She still can't shake

She welcomed the New Year
Unlike the last
She didn't know why
But her answer came fast

Someone she'd known
Since Middle School years
Began to stand out
Amongst her peers

This one felt different
Because he liked her, too
Now being with him
She feels something new

That girl was me
And please understand
That love has been hard

Just hold my hand


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  • hidingintheshadows9
    May 13, 2008
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    That was AMAZING wow im speechless!!!!!!!!!!


  • jasminerose
    May 12, 2008

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    A tale indeed of love, heartache and dealing with the pain of relationships..
    I am glad to see that you have brushed yourself off Sam and are opening your heart once again
    Beautifully written my friend
    Linda