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this girl...

i see a happy girl,
crying with laugher.
i see a energetic girl,
living her life to the fullest.
i see a sensible girl,
saying no to drugs and so forth.

But then i look,
i see a quiet girl,
worrying how she looks.
i see a crying girl,
alone and iscolated.
i see a mischevious girl,
giving in to her demons.

to live in another life would be a miracle.
i would take the chance,
and change what i can.

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  • Angelflower Greeters member
    May 19

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    This was such a touching piece..
    You really put a lot of emotion in this and you
    created a very vivid image.. I'm sure that many can relate to this.. Wonderful job..
    Best of luck..

    Angel