a spreading spray of attenuated forms
reaching from dark recesses,
a blind forward searching -
feeling for answers, direction
growth yearning,
striving for substance,
a place in the sun
taking a stance,
after due consideration,
waiting to see what
truths unfold
Author notes
picture prompt:
http://black-op-studios.deviantart.com/art/Nighttime-68433719
A contest entry
- Dark Pic Prompt (PIF)... by kiwigirljacks.
800 points, ended May 11, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is truly deserving of gold well done!!!!
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A stunning piece! I did read earlier but didn't get around to commenting! Congratulations on the well deserved gold
Gaylene
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Oh I can definitely relate to this! Love that first line and the rest spreads out from that beautifully. Dark and questioning..
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some wait, some launch, some wait to launch. is she ready to pounce or hide?
"a spreading spray of attenuated forms"
lovely phrase
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How beautifully dark and questing... Wonderful write.
Good luck in the contest...
Ken
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Oh I like this Marlene..you have captured the prompt well. All the best to you.
Linda
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I Like the wording in this take on the pic..
good luck
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