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Here I find

vast deserted sand
sunrise over crashing waves
here I find myself

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'Dazzle' (contest rules)
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  • Valley Girl silver member
    May 20

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    This is such a sweet haiku. You have really captured the essence of the picture. Best of luck in the contest.


  • ixtli
    May 13

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    This is a beautiful haiku. I think it really captures the idea of the contest. Thanks for entering and good luck!

  • ears2hearyou gold member
    May 12

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    I've always admired the discipline of the Haiku writers!

    loved this poem, the essence of simplicity lusciously
    unfolded! brillant writing! way to write!
    ears/Seattle


  • NurseChilly gold member
    May 12

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    very nice, very nice indeed

    sunrise can happen anywhere too... yes

  • iansawicki gold member
    May 11

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    a good piece, one day i am going to pack my bags and go and find a palce near a beach and just relax for the rest of my days


  • Amazon Huntress
    May 11

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    Very pretty little haiku, lovely take on the contest
    *~Huntress~*
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