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Stop Look, Listen

People tell me to view the world with open eyes
So I open them

People tell me to listen in lie
So I listen

I see death and hatred
I see family and friends turning against one another
I see dreams being broken and jobs being lost

Is this what I was told to see

I hear the news blaring more bad news
I hear screaming with no end
I hear words that can make any one wish for death

Is this what I was told to hear

Why open my ears and eyes if I only see this world at its worst
Why listen if all I can hear is hate

For now I'm just going to go back to bed
Dreaming of a world much better than this

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  • RawrrKat
    May 12
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    =)

  • extremely blatant and brutally honest!
    loved the ending "Dreaming of a world much better than this" it shows that there is still hope for the future.
    good work!
  • wat2do
    May 12

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    Im sorry you see the world like that, but i guess that i too see it that way sometimes. well good poem.


  • LittleAnn
    May 11

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    Maybe this would make great lyrics for... I guess you know.

    Good observations about the way people act nowadays...
    I love the repetitions of "see" and "hear", they really help accomplishing a certain impact on the reader... I don't really know how to explain it, but I think this was really good.

    Thanks for sharing!
    Keep up the good work!
    Annie

  • Each and every person views the world and all the good bad and ugly packed into it differently. This is more negative then some people, but its honest.
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