The always high standards of society and its rules
Always modifying themselves, according to times
The 21th century stares at the cities with tears
The new infections spread at light speed with ease
Neo-liberal waste spreading principles
Of freedom from bonds, redemption
And the now worthless marriage rings
A signal of love which has been rotting
Disregarded by the unpleasant nights
The whoreship of dissatisfactions
And the always welcomed stands, sins
The waste spreads slightly, advancing
Through the forests grown by ancestors
The roots of family destroyed, feeding evil
Sweet curses, the unsatisfied soul lusts
Kisses deserved by love, but spread between
One and other, they come and are gone
Chains are broken along with trust and love
A sincere death of principles is being lived on here
The maximum expression of freedom meaning the eternal lie
If freedom means the abolition of life, denying it is sane
For lust doesn't only carry tricks but evil bacteria of death
Author notes
My most sincere thoughts about cheating.
A contest entry
- STAY. by DAMSELx.
420 points, ended May 29, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well done, one has to wonder where it is all going. All my best wishes in the contest.
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This is such a great piece. The content and the diction are just...perfect. Best of luck in the contest!
--DAMSELx
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Holy reality
Once again you have sparked my interest with your words, as this poem is so very true on so many levels. Simply that marriage is being thrown away so easily really hits home for me. Not that I have thrown mine away easily, but I have seen many who have. Each and every line exposes the truth that self righteous people will never admit. Great all around write and one that should be brought to everyone for exposition...
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