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Shallow

I can't go deeper than what I've gone
Because there is nothing to see.
I can't remember a word of our song
Because there is nothing to sing.

You're an opportunistic moment
That I just cannot ignore.
But the minute I think of your face,
I realize there's nothing more.

And I cannot do this.

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  • She Stole My Voice
    May 11, 2008

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    "I can't remember a word of our song
    Because there is nothing to sing."
    Aw, that was so sad.
    I wish there was more to this poem,
    yet I don't because it's perfect the way it is-
    it's a complicated emotion haha.
    ♥

    ~Princess of Shadows~