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You!

You are each breath i take
You awaken my spirit
and loosen the aches and pains

I owe you so much
With every touch,
i'm yours
and yours alone

You egnited the flame
and became my only obsession
so many years back

You've give me all i need
to succeed,
as a parent
and i'm yours forever more

I'll never leave the flame unattended
i tend to keep it forever lit
with our love

I owe all my heart and more to you


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