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I've fallen for you

Baby I'm falling
Falling in love with you

I fall for your smile
& the look in your eyes

The way that you walk
& the way that you talk

I'm falling for your touch
& gentle lips

Falling for the rage that runs through you,
When you clutch your fist

I'm falling for you
& the things that you do

I've fallen for your small temper
& the way you say sorry

Baby I've fallen
Fallen so completly for you

The way that you sometimes hate me
Yet kiss me when you know
You want me

& the way that I crave your simple glance
When your not around

I crave for your scent
& the way that you laugh

I'm telling you baby
I've fallen

Fallen completly in love with

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  • venus21
    June 25, 2008

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    Good like all the outhers...

    This is also very good. I like when say & The way that I crave your simple glance When your not around. I think that is sweet.


    • Icry4YOU2mrow
      June 27, 2008
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      Awww thnx! Yeah its true though, i do crave her when shes not around.


  • NubianQueen05
    May 24, 2008

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    I like this poem...i know what you mean...i like the part about when you said you can hate me but still act like you want me and want 2 kiss me

    • Icry4YOU2mrow
      May 27, 2008
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      Thnx hun! yeah its true though she does, shell act like she wants nothing to do with me, but then shell change it with a soft kiss on my hand or my lips && im like OMG! lol


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    May 11, 2008

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    Ah..this is what the love is..your every word is pleasing and you are almost dancing in every expression..well done


  • B0b
    May 11, 2008
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    very nicely written babe...keep up the good work

    love Flic

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