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Her Cerulean Tears

Missing image

Third eye sight

follows mankind's footsteps

from chamber

where she rules as galactic queen.

 

Her womb

giving birth to humanity,

hoping they'd be

creation's cosmic diamond.

 

Shedding cerulean tears

seeing hate thrived more than love,

and telepathic messages meant to enlightened

produced Star Wars trilogy

instead of cancer cures.

Author notes

49 words. Picture prompt choice
Please credit the photographer:
Little Fish by `SeaFairy
http://www.deviantart.com/print/81745/

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  • She Stole My Voice
    May 11, 2008

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    From the title to the very last word-
    I was left speechless.
    It flows beautifully.
    Love it.
    Good luck in the contest and I hope you win!
    ♥

    ~Princess of Shadows~


  • Blooming Poet
    May 11, 2008

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    The title wowed me and of course the amazing poem to follow helps to. Loved the use of the prompt and the word limit. Great work Penman


  • StarEyes
    May 11, 2008

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    WOW!!!!! What a read! And what a take on the picture!!
    This is one powerful read! I love the message you have shared in this short verse!!

    Best of luck in this contest!!

    and love

    Nyetta