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Two Husbands Ago.

As we open up the dictionary,

And look the pages through,

Under definiton of liar,

Sits a photograph of you,

 

I'm sure I'd find the same thing,

If I looked under cheat,

Description given, spelled out in bold,

A rogue full of deceit,

 

Every late night working,

Just doing it for 'us',

I know what you were up to,

And it gave you such a buzz,

 

I don't need a dictionary,

To tell me what you are,

Homeless now and broke,

Because I got the house and car,

 

Does your mistress now not want you?

Well that really is a shame,

Your reputation gone to pot,

You've only yourself to blame,

 

Whatever were you thinking?

Oh! The 'male menopause',

She only wanted money you fool!

As she raked you with her claws,

 

Memories drifting onward,

Emotions overflow,

But time is a great healer,

And you were two husbands ago! 

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  • Ravensdark
    July 27, 2008

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    Nothing better the raising the middle fingerand saying a disdainful 'fuck you'. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • crazyash007
    July 26, 2008

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    i liked the way you rhymed it and it was not at all force full rhyme.....

    the words were used perfectly fine anf the flow was good......

    As we open up the dictionary,

    And look the pages through,

    Under definiton of liar,

    Sits a photograph of you,

    this part is really great.....i liked it alot.....it sort of made me giggle i am sorry for that.....i understand the emotion you have put in them but i giggled coz i i thought " how true".....

    gr8 work


    • mystic-angel gold member
      July 26, 2008
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      Ha Ha Thanks, don't worry about giggling at it - it was supposed to be humourous. It made me laugh when I was writing it!
      Blessings
      Mystic-angel.


  • nilav
    July 22, 2008
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    hihihi....very interesting and very true...


  • my1lovewearsdiapers
    June 3, 2008

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    This is a very cute piece, and it made me laugh for it shows the truth of all cheaters and the person they cheat with. Well done and the best of luck to you in my contest.


  • Dark Otter
    May 16, 2008
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    Yep! Humorous.

    He got what was coming to him. I hope this helped with letting go of it.


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    May 15, 2008

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    I love this! I am currently splitting up with my husband because of his infidelity & found this poem brought humor to a very personal, painful experience. Thank you for sharing!!!


  • crimsondew
    May 13, 2008
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    lol..made me laugh...poem runs smoothly !

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