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I Miss

I miss you

The way your fingers felt
gliding along my flesh
The subtle way you make
every moment unforgettable

I miss you

Each breath you breathe
the way you never seem
to judge my mistakes
you're stunning

I miss you

The steps you take each day
are still burning on the pavement
your path still perfectly marked
but never again followed

I miss you

The skin beneath the ink
and the cute noises you make
the goofy way you laugh
makes my heart drop

I miss you

You'll never know just how much
You'll never see what could be

I miss us

It was two days
written and extracted
from a fairytale
directed by your sweet lips

I miss the almost

The almost of yesterday
The almost of tomorrow

I miss every bit of you
every smell and sight

I hate this.

Washington has nothing on me.
Please don't leave.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    May 11, 2008

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    Ah..a crying piece..with tearful words..this is indeed a heartfelt piece you are here with..I love the honesty..well done...