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Flamenco

Oh their songs! Raucous but gentle.
Clapping hands; a sensual dance.
Freed from moonlighted sky's rental,
singing grief through musical trance,
embracing a divine romance.
Their pain paints a hard history;
strange words riding notes to a chance
to live with joy and mystery.

Author notes

A Huitain.
Rhyme-scheme: a/b/a/b/b/c/b/c
Each line contains only 8 syllables.

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