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Death


Her body lay in the gutter
blood trickled in the rain
mingling with petrol
making rainbows.











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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 16, 2008

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    Woweee so much within so little words...so sad..incorporated the words well, so fitting

    Thank you and good luck

    Cindy


  • jasminerose
    May 12, 2008

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    Oh my.. such a sad piece with vivid imagery!! Excellent take off the prompt my friend!!
    All my best to you!
    Linda


  • tawk gold member
    May 12, 2008

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    This is so sad. Wow makes one really think and be thankful for their lives. Such a sad way to leave this world all alone in a gutter in the rain. thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest my dear friend Theresa


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    May 11, 2008

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    A really good take on the prompt, if a little on the dark side for you.
    All the best in the contest...


    Love
    Suz
    xx