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My Traveling Companion for Life

There is a prayer on my lips,

  And my eyes are full of tears.

Why do all of our dear souls have to die?

 

People are people with plans for life.

  People need people, both day and night.

Someone to brightem their way as a friend.

 

A friend who can mentor and watch.

  To teach us to laugh and cry as life moves about.

To remind us to smile and sing a lot.

 

Even notice how a path is made.

  One for each of you and they blend.

So close together as if one.

 

To all of my friends, I have traveled with you.

  Right to the path where mine ends,

But we never travel with  out our Friend up above.

 

 

 

This I am sure is not what you are looking for.

  I"ll bet your dad would say this is one to hold close

We all have our own seperat time here on earth.

 We never have the choice of when.

It is like going somewhere, I want to see everything

  Somewhere along the way thisngs are cut short.

You are not forgoten by your day nor God.

He makes openings for us if we just look around

Someone is in need of you as you are in need of them

No I didn't say to replace your dad

Maybe a dad lost a child , or never had a child

You may be the one to fill each others bill.

 

I didn't enter this contest for the points.

It was to help you over your pain

You still have a lot of life to live

May God Bless you always and on this day that

makes life a little harder than usual...     old mac

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  • z etoile
    May 14, 2008
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    Oh how beautiful to help someone with a poetry.. Great job mac!
    keep writing


  • Wind Walker
    May 12, 2008

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    Dear Brother

    I liked this very much. There are a couple typos that you might want to go back and fix - misspelings, but the words expressed are from the heart.
    Well Done
    W W