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waisted tear drops

Tears for none hear

No one to lend an ear

the pain so deep

So hard to bare

People acting like nothings wrong

They don't care

If people new the half

Of what happens to me

It would blow there tops

But for now my tears are

Waisted tear drops

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Srry could not give credit I do poems on my phone look past this its a good poem

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 14, 2008
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    Nice imaginative take on prompt, sad, tears and no one notices.
    Thank you for your entry.
    Marlene


  • KayJay
    May 12, 2008

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    Very nice... full of honest emotion well expressed...
    I think you should be rightfully proud of this...
    Well done...
    Ken