Dark eyes seeing what others can't
Blacker than the deepest waters
Skin bluer than the coldest touch
Shiny specs, like gills on her face
She has the power to see within
But even that couldn't stop her,
from feeling pain by her lover
Humans, deceitful and selfish creatures
Thus life
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Little Fish by `SeaFairy
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt #2 - Quickie by marlene47.
600 points, ended May 14, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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SO TRUE I UNDERSTAND EVERYTHING U WRITEN! VERRY GOOD!
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wow...
humans are probable the most selfish animal to ever walk the earth... but there are the few that truely want to help others... and these are the "freaks"... thanks for sharing
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Interesting take on the prompt, yet with all her power to see within, she's broken hearted by a human. Thank you for your entry.
Marlene -
People are jerks. And the way you said she has the power to see within, it's like she has powers. Very nice
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awww =( so sad
very emotional
i rlly like it
i was gonna do this contest!
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Ooh.. hun you did a great job!
you really captured the picture..
And the ending really brought it home!
great write!
Best of luck hun!
Angel
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WOW its all i can say. good job u made me speechless
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i really liek the ending, its very strong. and the rest has a nice and deep feel to it, nice job and good luck with the contest
take care -
this is beautiful. i love your take on the prompt and good luck in the contest
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Love this one & relates to life so well. Just brilliant =) gd luck in the contest!
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i like your take on the picture. good luck in the contest!
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wow very vivid. i love the line *shiny specs, like gills on her face* that is amazing.
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Nice! A great take on the prompt. My fav lines were 3-6. Such depth. I wish you luck in the contest!
~Kystal Angel
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This is beautiful!!!! I love the line humans, deceitful and selfish creatures. Its so true we realy are.
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