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[ Mom, ]

Mom,
you're the bomb!
Mom,
your oh so calm

You are awesome
way better than a roses blossum

you are cool 
and you're all i think of while at school

and i love you sooooooooooo much 
even when i eat brunch

Mom there is sooooooooo much to say
i just never want you to go away!

so in one sentence i will try to tell you how awesomely coolio you are
and i know it will sound bazaar


but you ROCK MY TOE SOX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author notes

HAPPY MOTHERS DAY,MOM.

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  • xxhoopstar21xx
    June 14, 2008

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    wow!!!!
    great poem!! ur mamma wud be proud!!!!!! lol my mom is awesoem too. she gives me money. lol. congrats on ur shiny trophy lol


    • SmartBrick
      June 14, 2008
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      Mo Mom was proud!Thanks for the clappies!

      • xxhoopstar21xx
        June 14, 2008
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        u showd her that?? and ur welcome!


        • SmartBrick
          June 14, 2008
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          Yea...It was kinda her Mother's day present.I couldn't think of anything else...so I thought a poem would be good.Hey is there any poem that you want me to read?


  • piratehearts57
    May 21, 2008
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    so so sweet your mom would be proud


  • jewlinz
    May 12, 2008
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    this is AWsome! Nice trophy!

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    May 11, 2008
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    Very nice Mother's Day greeting for your mom.
    Thanks for entering. Good luck.
    Brian

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