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A Child's Sight

Sparkels of rain drops border the child's face,
Showing the nature of her curiosity.

Imagination flows freely like the water of rivers.

Nothing escapes her sight,
Nothing remains untouched by her quickly working mind.
That which eludes adults is seen clearly through the child's eyes.
Things of simple nature turn into masterworks of complexity.

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  • Iliad Keys
    October 14

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    Charming, touching, innocent, and cute. This seems to fit with your name and page very well. Good work describing the wonder of childhood friend!


  • honey bear
    January 29

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    how very true my friend , children are so perceptive and notice things that seem invisible to us as we take them for granted, a lovely write, thank you for sharing and keep up the good work

  • WinterxSage
    July 3, 2008

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    although i am 18 i understand your struggle to keep in touch with your iner child. it is this ability that permits people our age to understand more than adults


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 14, 2008

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    Nice take and observation; the candid expression of a child's curiosity in the rain. Thank you for entering.
    Marlene


  • willowprincess
    May 11, 2008

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    oh to see the world as a child. i would love to look through their eyes and understand the world through their minds.

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