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Why -- short poem--

We long for love and seek out new lovers
Expecting new things that make them different from others.


There is no need to desire for girlfriends,
Or boyfriends for the girls,
The portrait of love expressed in old eras
Are merely drab paintings, Overhead
Murals reflected in mirrors.


Men search for a girl that makes the chills appear
Whenever they are around, no matter how near.


I still wonder if I feel it now, or is this just a new compassion.


Perhaps she looks at me
And inside she is laughing...

what do you honestly think?

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  • z etoile
    May 14, 2008

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    Awe.. No one could ever laugh at you... you are in love oh that is so beautiful
    Write lots of poems about it... this was a beautiful poem. Haven't read anything from you in a while.