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Guilt.

Frozen behind bars,
Too late to go back,
Too late to rewrite,
What's already been done.

Hearts have been broken,
Lies have been told,
Promises withdrew,
And dreams skewed.

It didn't mean anything,
Baby I swear.
I'm just a man,
Victim to her lust.

I'm corrupted by the fact,
I think that you know,
You know what I've done,
But try to ignore.

I don't know what it was,
It happened so fast,
And I don't know what to do,
Because I still love you.

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  • DAMSELx
    May 19, 2008

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    This has a very nice flow. This is short but it says a whole lot in the stanzas written. Thank you for your entry, best of luck!