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Dreams

Little,
Maggots sink,
Their teeth into my brain,
Then squeeze my horrors until they're
real.

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Ok...whenever I dream all my thoughts that i dont even know about become real and then when i wake up i have all these memories about my life i really didnt want to know.

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  • Pollycheck
    May 25, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This may be your dreams, but it is just not my kind of poem. Sorry, but it is well written.


  • alyssaxo
    May 11, 2008

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    It's an interesting write, but I liked it. Originality is something I love, & you've definately got it. Thank you for entering.


  • ucancallmereal
    May 11, 2008

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    OMG. ahhhh thats scaring me!! i hate maggots.. but i dont know, but i think i kinda understand.. but i mean the poem, it was just WOW. geeeshhh. it was AWESOME! im just green(:
    hope your okay hun xxx