Sweet love! Intoxicating like a flame
That burns with passion in the faded night,
Far brighter than the stars that call your name
And glitter near the moon's translucent light.
I hear your breath, the gentle rise and fall
Is precious like the last lost hours at dusk
That settle into night, I hear your call,
The fragrance of a rose, the scent of musk.
Sweet love! You are the sunlight and the moon,
Apollo's fiery breath, the starry sky,
You touch me and my heart begins to swoon,
I care not for with you I live and die.
From now until my bones turn into dust,
I'll love you still and why? Because I must!
Please tell me what you think
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Love sweet love, that is an intoxicating flame, the more you have the more you burn. Great line-I hear your call, the fragrance of a rose, the scent of musk. This stimulates the heart to welcome a chance to be so tied and bonded as one.
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i thought the age of romance was long over? lol
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A wonderful sonnet that proclaims the highest ideals of romantic love felt for the 'other'.
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beautiful write.simple and well understood
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very interesting flow..very romantic..and love your ending..thanx so much for sharing..blessings..namaste..
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Intoxicating
A wonderful piece of art in which you have penned so perfectly well the intoxication of love in the most brilliant way. "I'll love you still and why? Because I must!"
Well done!
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All consuming love! The last four lines here speak of an unending devotion to a love that will live thoroughout the ages. Very pretty and well written verse. Thanks for sharing!
Az
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excellent
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your warmness is incredible...well done....I love this wonderful piece..thanks for sharing it with us my friend.,...
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your sonnets again have me swooning... especially a love sonnet... i am a softy for those. beautiful.
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Memorable!
What to say...
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Sweet love! Intoxicating like a flame
That burns with passion in the faded night,
Far brighter than the stars that call your name
And glitter near the moon's translucent light.
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With this lines you captured me for life. Your poetry is shining with the most beauty of sonnets. Memorable poetry!
~Sonja~
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Multi-Modal Must ?
"M ust !" musty turns, "might" fails if over time
I ntoxication finds mind spun awry,
N or can the best intentions answer why
D ust dust returns, when ends so soon our rhyme.
O ne heart alone beats seizure unforeclosed,
R esponds with sharing, caring, therefore needs
H ope's reinforcement, feeds affection's seeds
E xtending rainbow bridge metamorphosed
A s interpenetration stimulates
R eel danced by two beyond the end of days
T o underscore whole more than parts may phrase.
H ere multi-modal harmony creates
E nchantment which may stitch effect and cause,
ASKS and receives, ignoring mortal laws ...
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Love
So illusive for many as we indulge in lust instead. But the words of a fine poet can bring us back to those wonderful dreams. You have a great talent poet
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a beautiful piece, ah yes, that is right, when love visits our hearts there is not a lot we can do about it really, we have to go with the flow of it, we must indeed
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