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This Heart

______This heart____________________
____beats for you t_________________
__his heart smiles f________________
_or you this heart lo_______________
ves for you this heart laughs_______
for you this heart lives for you____
this heart dreams for you this hea__
_rt hopes for you this heart wai_ts_
__for you this heart yearns for__you
___this heart aches for you th___is
____heart breaks for you this____hea
_____rt cries for you this _____hea_
______rt dies for you this_____hear_
_______t fails for yo______u this __
________heart sigh______s for you___
_________u this_____ heart can______
___________ no longer wait__________
_____________ for you_______________

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It got messed up after I hit submit -_-

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  • Beautiufl piece..warm concept..and heart warming scenario is here..well done..and thanks for sharing it my friend....

  • Candy6
    May 11

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    Good write. You're trying to make this into shape of a heart. This type of poetry is concrete poem.