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...Us [a contest entry]

My head against her chest
We were the last two awake-
Her and me. Me and her.

Everyone else was gone
Long asleep in their bunks
It was just us
Up in the deck of the small boat

With moonlight's reflections
Softly on the gloss of the wooden floor
Stars danced bright above our heads

As the ocean slowly swayed
And the low cawing of the birds filled the air
I knew this was how it was meant to be

Her and me. Me and her. Us.

Author notes

ughh the day i had to write it i just HAD to get a writers block... [havent talked to *him* in 5 entire dayss... ] anyways.. i tried... not so good though.. oh well!! either way i still hope you like it jaja.. ily gioo

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With Broken Wings =]

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A contest entry

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  • Breathless Ballons
    June 14, 2008
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    I LOVE THIS! soooo wonderful. great take on the prompt.

    thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Breathless Ballons
    May 29, 2008

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    As the ocean slowly swayed
    And the low cawing of the birds filled the air
    I knew this was how it was meant to be


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    Thats your prompt, take it however you want.

    Can't wait!