Sinister sweetness
Kissing my wrists
Author notes
Just going with the prompt.
A contest entry
- five words by blackday.
1050 points, ended May 12, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think ?
Comments
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This wouldn't have been cliche if you would have titled it a bit more creatively. The sinister sweetness was a good phrase though.


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Thanks. I kind of chose to be cliche because of the wording of the contest... it seemed to beg for just that.
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