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Something to Ponder About

The growing & falling leaves,
when leaves fall,
I wonder who grieves?

Ants are almost everywhere,
squished by the second,
Do they feel despair?

Humans, oh so smart,
highest on the food chain,
eating animals a la carte.

Do you think that this would make better lyrics if I adjusted it than a poem?

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