Time made echoes
of heartbeats and whispers
shared as water from a cup
memory like morning
folded into a risen day,
and slowly smiles
covered my face
I looked into skies
and saw miracles
of silver stillness and constant stars,
a chaos of clouds and shadows
and I knew there would always be
this place Love, when my thoughts
~a wish within waves~
carried us from separate shores
to touch upon the crests of waters.
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful images here, of love as a shared cup, as necessary to life as water, of a smile like a sun, and the solitary thoughts of the poet looking at the night sky gives an almost Zen feeling to the poem. There will always be this place Love, it connects us all.
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"memory like morning
folded into a risen day"-Beautiful!
Universal Love connects all. It always shows through nature.
"~a wish within waves~
carried us from separate shores
to touch upon the crests of waters"
Thank you.
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'silver stillness', such a delicate way to refer to the moon. The encounter on the crests of water, in the ocean, waves, movements...simply lovely!
Love your romantic poems and thoughts h
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