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Swallows of Arizona Sun

 

 

 

We drove asphalt for miles,

chasing dreams we knew could

never be caught; running

from small towns and old folks.

 

Stopped for gas, somewhere in

the middle of nowhere,

on highway 69; and I swear I

saw poetry written in the dust.

 

I felt like flying under swallows

of Arizona sun,

where sweat clung to skin, you

brushed away strands of

saturated hair, just to plant

a kiss where it had been.

 

We drove asphalt for miles,

and made love in leather seats;

where poetry was birthed

again and again,

in the slap of sweltering skin.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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- Poetry written on asphalt

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 31
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    Wow! This was really something. One hot tamale of a poem!!!!!

  • the imagery in this piece was very vivid and rich. Thanks for entering and good luck

  • EvilKate gold member
    May 11

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    Hot and sultry and raw and real - everything wonderful about poetry and life and freedom, all so skilfully threaded. Possibly your best, definitely my new favourite by you and, the bookmarking? - never in doubt.

    Marvellous work hun.




  • Rowan gold member
    May 11

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    I could feel the heat of this one. Stunning imagery; the sweat, the Arizona sun... sigh...


  • shepherd23 silver member
    May 10
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    Whoo wee...

    sweatin' and a lovin'
    what could be better?
    I know writin' poems!
    S23

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