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I Wake

I wake to
the both of you
each morning.
What am I to do?

No way could I ever
put another before either of you.
Each morning I wake to
the two of you.

Look deep into your eyes.
One pair at a time.
My heart just melts.
And that's where I get lost.

All the hugs and kisses
One could ever imagine
All the I LOVE YOUs
Not even a word I have to speak.

My days would be so lonely.
Without the two of you.
To help make me realize.
that I am needed and wanted.

I wake to the two of you.
look deep into your eyes.
One set of hazel.
the other a deep ocean blue.

The happiness the two
of you bring to my life.
I thank GOD that I have you.
This happiness I endure someday
you shall know.

Though it's just the three of us
My days are filled with joy.
For I have my little man.
and I have my baby girl.

I love the two of you
much more than you will know.
My life would be so blue.
without the two of you.

I wake to
the two of you
each morning.
and we have the days to share.

Author notes

for my babies my little prince and my princess i love you two more than words can say.

Written December 20th, 2003

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  • di ivers
    December 26, 2003
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    llse ty hun for the comment...i truly enjoy writing about my kids but here the past few days they are with their dad and i cant seem to write..again ty..peace love joy and happiness be with you always..

    ~~DI~~


  • Ahlyn
    December 26, 2003
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    Weeee. This was awesome! I just love it when mothers talk so vividly about their children. I soak the love all up, hehe. At first I thought it was your husband and your son, but am I stupid, huh! Great poem Di, I adored it. Keep writing and safe, happy holidays.
    Ilse


  • di ivers
    December 22, 2003
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    janesays.ty vm for the comment..peace love joy and happiness be with you always..happy holidays..

    ~~DI~~

  • janesays
    December 22, 2003
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    This is so profoundly sweet! A mother's love is truly an awe inspiring thing. This is a beautifull display of emotion and I'm deeply moved. Great job.


  • di ivers
    December 20, 2003
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    sis ty for the comment..love ya lots..cant wait till we get to have a tea party me you and ash..going to be a great one..ttyl sis love ya lots..

    ~~DI~~


  • di ivers
    December 20, 2003
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    Rock Star ty vm for the comment peace be with you always..happy holidays..

    ~~DI~~


  • JaydensMommy69
    December 20, 2003
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    Awwww...how sweet, I love this one Di!!
    *Shell*
    (Tell those 2 beautiful angels of yours I said hi!!..Were gonna have a tea party, Promise..Jus dont know when lol)


  • Rock Star Angel
    December 20, 2003
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe,
    thats a cute little emotional write.
    great job though!


    ~Rock Star Angle~

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