immersed unwillingly in a pitch black mind
shrouded in darkness and eager to find
the dearth of truth to portent the call
before succumbing to the great fall
dashing dubiously down a slippery slope
clingingly clenching to a last shred of hope
drowning out abhorrent calls of haste
beseeching apathetically to make time waste
condignly landing in the pit of despair
amid shirked and desolate beyond repair
struggling to reconstruct the forsaken event
upon which caused this expected descent
once to their with they begin to know
that i was ordained for the world below
A contest entry
- A quick one for the best! by Peachy.
1800 points, ended July 6, 2008, 36 entries
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Comments
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Thanks for entering.
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This is good and I like it.
Some of the words don't fit; they don't make sense for that particular sentence but it was pretty good still. It needs a little grammar fixing and a proofread but nothing major.
Thanks for the entry!
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