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Braindancing

Slivers of memory tango sensuously through
an intertwining of us.
Fingerlaced flesh smears flesh, eyes
sear into a secret one.
Unknown music spirals, bursts, a
firework carnation seeps swiftly
towards the tranquillity of you.

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 27

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    Well done. It is a bit more difficult to pull off the feelings in such short words, but you did it nicely.

    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm

  • Pollycheck silver member
    May 12
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    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. I think I might have to go and take a cold shower after reading this sensual poem.