Playing with my emotions
Walking on me like a rag doll
Raping me from my heart
Putting a mask on my innocent body
Smearing blood on my rainbow
Masking my heart
With Crimson disgust...Death was at my door
I was on a rollercoaster all along
I was feed with your lies
You were killing my life
As you were living I was dieing
Fading....
Smearing blood on my rainbow
Masking my heart
With Crimson disgust...Death was at my door
I was innocent, you raped me of it
Disgusting, filthy, broken down
Wasted and you took advantage of it all
I was the rainbow in the sky
You were the blood that tainted its beauty
You brought everything that was once pure
To a disgusting, bloody halt
Waking into it I cried, and you laughed at me
Smearing blood on my rainbow
Masking my Heart
With Crimson Disgust...Death was at Me Door.....
A contest entry
- promt/ rainbows and blood by tainfinite.
800 points, ended May 24, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Get The Gold for a pre-write by piccola.
300 points, ended June 3, 2008, 43 entries
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Comments
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nice job. filled with great images that the reader could see. I am sorry that it goes over the line limit though.
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Wow, strong, deep...hit at my heart like
great work on the prompts here, thanks and good luck
Cin
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