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Haiku







receding snow
one lily
slowly opens wide.








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  • Jamesleelong37
    May 17

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    Perfect!

    I loved it!

    Very tender and the reality was that equivalent of a humbling moment, I found to be peaceful...

    Brilliant...

    ~ James ~


  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    May 14

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    I can see why you won gold! It's gorgeous!
    You have an astute awareness of nature and how it connects with our own life cycles.


  • blackday
    May 11

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    This is a good haiku. It had a bit of a weak "ah" moment for me, but the image was crisp & well done.


  • Ithica silver member
    May 10

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    Perfect! The best so far!!! And a "ku" to boot!!! [I have the perfect pic. for this one... ] Thank-you for entering!


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 10
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    I like the linking of the two movements, the ending and the beginning.
    Marlene

  • sheltered
    May 10
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    Nice Ku dude...

    The grass in town here is dark green
    but there's still a foot of snow in the woods.


  • Perception
    May 10

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    ooooo...how pretty I really love your descriptions in here.. So simple... Yet so beautiful. You didn't need a bunch of words to show how beautiful one thing was. You just needed these.
    Wonderful
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