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To Sneak Away and Trade Kisses

You say that you need time and space, but I feel love
as I am lost in the flashy iridescence of your body
and the jasmine that drifts off of your compels me.

The world is a twisted convoluted mesh of colored confusion
and only the touch of your soft and sensual hand can settle
the deep storms that roil in hurricane force within me.

Let's sneak away like young lovers and trade kisses
share new found innocence and wonder of the needed touch.
I know deep down you are more than I could ever want.
Fall into my open arms Let me rescue you as you will me.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    May 13

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    Absolutely stunning write
    I have fallen in love with your poem
    The feelings overflow my mind
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie

  • CaliOkie silver member
    May 11

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    Excellent. Good response to the prompt. That picture sure seems to pull for the dark and atmospheric.

    Good luck.

    Garrison


  • Ithica silver member
    May 10

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    You are such an old softie, huh??? As the romance oozes out of your pen... let it rekindle the fire that burns... where you two begin...