Soul sings,
heart hears,
minds express
through language of the body
Cloak of raindrops,
suit of sun rays,
woven wisps of wind
Body is the voice
of earth dancing.
A contest entry
- a sacred garment... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended May 24, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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just simple but very creative imagination and very beautifuly drafted and crafted..my thanks for sharing it...well done..
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Well Crafted
This poem is rich in the visual and structual aspects, yet, contrary to the host's directive of the body being a sacred garment, this great piece provides only body language and beautifully describes the beauty of earth's elements.
Despite its failure to fully describe our flesh as a garment together with its purpose, your talent for the written word definitely shines through.
Much love in Christ, BonnieQ
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Beautiful
Wonderful imagry in this write. Well done
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