Bloom a shade deeper, than the daffodils.
Author notes
Prompt:
7 Words.
And Bravo on doing another one =D
Background: Fields of Gold by .Ash
In a list
A contest entry
- Seven Little Words... by Ithica.
525 points, ended May 11, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest here.
Comments
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Beautiful muse, so nicely wrapped in short phrase, well done.
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Very nice. I love the image you projected.
Well done!
K
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I really liked this one.
How only seven little words can give
so much more than at first read through.
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7 Lovely words that provoke profound depth of inner reflection... Very nice!!!
I wish you all the best in the contest!!
Jasminerose
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it must be spring!
i really do like the 7 words you chose, colorful with a deep meaning... i hope i can blook a shade deeper.
well done.
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I keep thinking "sunny side up" as in put your best foot forward..? To each their own I suppose... But I like this!!! Thank-you for entering!
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Fabulous background - isn't the earth amazing!
Loved the choice of words... the challenge of them.
Marlene -
I like how you used the word then rather than than...lol
Invokes deeper though.
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oops... Heh. That was a mistake. *quickly changes - and hopes that no one saw* (I'm really bad at grammar... i don't know how I got to writing poems....)
Thanks for... pointing that out.
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Oh, this is very thoughtful... and a bit deep. I like that in poetry Best of luck to you!
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ooohhh, now this is aweosme, i loves it
wonderful job and good luck
take care
stephanie
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