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[ They said it would be ok ]

They said it would be ok
but they didn't hear you say
that you never loved me
you were trying to be funny
by leading me on
knowing my love for you was strong
you laugh at everything i did for you
even though my love for you was true

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I haven't been in a poem mood for awhile so it's ok if u hate it, it's not too good so i understand

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  • SlashBabe
    May 13

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    ok...its like u captured the beginning of every highscool relationship. love it (as corny as the review just sounded).
  • ali-rae
    May 10
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    This is good!.... It is true it happens alot!